Feeling on the brink
on the edge of something new
tossing around different thoughts
to clarity from once confused.
In my dreams I’m lost
walking alone within streets
feeling out of control
and somehow incomplete.
Feeling on the brink
on the edge of something new
now awake I contemplate
what it is I have to do.
To be like a rock face
fierce, unyielding and strong
to face those inner battles
determined to hold on.
Feeling on the brink
on the edge of something new
everything is becoming clear
my mind feels renewed.
So close to the edge
yet it’s calm and serene
around me is beauty
the likes I’ve never seen.
Dare I take a leap
to trust, believe and renew
to live life on the edge
and to try something new.
I’ve been having some really strange dreams lately, vivid dreams where I’m lost and unfocused and falling yet within these dreams I’m surrounded by beautiful things. Is it perhaps a sign to step out of my comfort zone and take some chances?
It feels as though there’s change in the air and I’m on the verge of something new.ย I’m not sure what lies around the corner, but then who does?ย What I do know is that I need to trust my instincts, like these rock climbers and hang gliders in Victoria’s high country.
Perhaps feeling as though we’re living life on the edge doesn’t mean we’re going to fall. Perhaps we’re meant to fly but if not maybe we can find a balance to simply be strong and brave enough to try new things that might open up a world of possibilities.
Let’s live in the moment, take chances and be flexible, walk to the edge and look at the view and never doubt that we’re capable of doing great things.
Be safe and happy as we continue the journey.
In response to The Daily Post Weekly Photo Challenge – Edge
This is the first time i read something like poetry.
Utterly splendid. Loved it.
And as always great message t the end bud!
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Thanks so much Cezane.
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I like your writing on this, but you’d never get me up those mountains ๐
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Thanks Derrick. I’ll climb them but the conventional way … on foot. ๐
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Woahhh, mountain climbing! That’s awesome! And such a beautiful poetry to go with it ๐
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Thanks so much Rashmi ๐
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Beautiful post…full of positivity.
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Thanks Mann.
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Yes don’t be scared to go with the gut feeling. There is no such thing as a wrong decision because decisions always move forward. That’s not you up those rocks is it? Louise
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Too true, decisions always move us forward. And me, right up the top? No, I wish I was that brave. I was the one taking the photo. ๐
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Love the poetry! I prefer walking up the mountain, though. My “edge” will have to come in a different form!
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Oh yes, me too!
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Bravo for the climb and the amazing poetry as well. This write was as good as any poetry you can find her in WordPress. Wishing you and yours and amazing weekend.
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Oh, thank you so much for your amazing compliment. Not sure I deserve the accolade for the climb though. I was the one at the bottom with the camera!
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Something good is coming! Have a great weekend.
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Hope so Wendy! You too. ๐
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wow…what a post for the prompt ๐ the poem so aptly written for the pictures awesome indeed ๐
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Thanks so very much!
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Spread your wings and fly Miriam, but, please keep safe !! Maybe I should start to call you Adventure Woman !!
Have a great weekend………..
Brooke
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Oh, you make me laugh! Thanks Brooke, I’ve mellowed a lot! Hope you have a great weekend too. ๐
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Go for it, I may not camp, BUT I did do a bungy jump, it was the most fantastic feeling !!!
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Good for you. Now that’s something I wouldn’t do!
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May you feel the love of God when you turn to his will and take a leap of faith. โค โค โค
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Thank you kindly.
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You found my summer cottage! I could live there!
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Haha I bet you could!
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Let’s hope there is something amazing just around the corner for you, Miriam. I hope you share with us when it does happen. Have a great weekend.
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Thanks Carol. If and when it happens I’ll let you know!
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Answer the call, you won’t be disappointed. Your words and photography are fantastic.
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Thank you so much Barbara.
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Beautiful pictures and lovely poem. โฅ
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Thanks Sandra โก
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Fly, my friend. Your mum’s holding your wings!! You are destined for heart-overflowing-SUCCESS and happiness. โค๏ธ๐โค๏ธ
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Such beautiful words, thank you my dear Jess. Yes, I think she is! xo
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Beautiful poem, images and your own reflection is insightful. It reminds me of the quote ‘what if I fall? Oh darling but what if you fly?’
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Oh yes, I love that quote too. Thanks Daisy. xo
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Wow! This is so exciting, Miriam ๐
Gorgeous poem โค
Living on the edge can be a lifestyle if you like it and if you can do it. I would love to do it because I love adrenaline so much. I also love the beauties that can be seen only on the edge, like you said.
Have a magical weekend, my dear friend โค
xoxo
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Thank you so much my dear Monica. Wishing you much beauty always, wherever you are. xo
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Wow…i wish i could be as brave as you are…i wish i could do what you can do…
And i wish i could write a poem similar to this..
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You’re so kind … I bet you could! โก
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Yes! It’s definitely in the air as the seasons are set to change. Eclipses and full moons bring about the energy of change, too! Let’s transform and rise up. Lovely post, Miriam! Looking forward to seeing where you go with the edges. Much love! Tiffany
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Thank you my beautiful friend, yes you’re right, change is afoot. Tonight there is sn incredible full moon and it feels as though anything is possible. Enjoy the weekend. โฅ
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Yes, anything is possible! Have a great weekend, Miriam!
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Thanks Tiffany โฅ
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You’re welcome! โค๏ธ
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It’s sometimes good to try something new. Um… take a rope or a parachute. ๐
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I’ll keep that in mind!
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Yes! It is good to have the courage to try something new…and maybe that is exactly what we are supposed to be doing.
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Absolutely Ann. Stepping out of our comfort zone.
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Wow Wat a Kewl Launch site :0 i’d love to fly there ๐ .what a kewl spot! yes indeeD! ๐
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Absolutely! Thanks.
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Wonderful poem, Miriam! The photos match perfectly with your words. Great choice for this theme!
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Thanks again Sandra. Always appreciate you reading.
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Great reponse to the challenge, Miriam. Your dreams sound very positive to me. ๐
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Thank you Sylvia. ๐
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Marvellous!
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Thanks Roberta.
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You are welcome!
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Great poem with a meaningful message โค
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Thank you gorgeous girl. Glad you enjoyed.
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I think that taking that step – on beyond – opens up new chapters or new adventures in life. Challenging yourself to do things that once were limiting. I thoroughly enjoyed the poem and post, Miriam. Thank you for sharing it.
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Yes, I totally agree Rob. It can be confronting stepping right out of our comfort zone but I’m finding it easier to just ‘live in the moment’ these days. Thanks for dropping by.
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I love living on the edge! Great post.
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Thanks!
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Lovely poem Miriam, beautiful words and rhyme scheme – it made me feel like I was tumbling but in a nice way if that makes sense? Sort of floating along towards something new xx
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Yes, that’s exactly how I felt when I was writing it. Thanks Hayley. xo
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